Here is a video that Mr Gleeson made!!!
today we landed on Gallipoli we arrived by row boats to the shore lots of people got shot when they got off the boats. i`m lucky i ran across to the shore the sun was so brie like light shining in my eyes my bag is so heavy
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-ANZAC DAY MARKS the Australian and new Zealand forces landed on Gallipoli on the 25th of April.
hi my name is jemaya i will share things in my blog like what we are doing at school and more.